Which is good. Kind of. The Tone Book is done, and I'm quite proud of it, but the shot lists aren't done and need some good, hard work.
I will be working all weekend on the shot lists as well as Camera Movement clips for the tone book and another draft of the script.
I met with my mentor, Pablo, Thursday at 6 PM. My dialogue scenes with Scott and Angela aren't quite there. He gave me some good pointers: Scott has the gift of the gab while Angela is never comfortable speaking. He also helped me figure out a more devastating and real dialogue exchange for the balcony scene.
And there's so much to do in the next two weeks: we have until July 17th to greenlight the film. To do that we need:
- a final script (working on it)
- a final budget
- a final schedule
That means lots of meetings and a location scout this week. All the while, I need to work on storyboards and rehearsals.
But tonight, I'm going to see Public Enemies and do laundry with the wife. I'm so whipped and I love it.
Tomorrow... I will be enjoying the 4th of July with my family.